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At 9:01pm on July 14, 2008, Grace Messina said…: Rachel, when you read your first draft to the group, you instantly pulled me in with your first sentence. You've given me a sliver of a world and a seductive, intriguing James. I'm curious to know more about this microcosm and the characters in it. You've also managed to create some of the most beautiful "flowery" language I've read in a while. You've put together the kind of words that make me want to savor every moment of the story. I can't wait to read more of your writing.

At 6:44pm on July 13, 2008, Charan P said…: All I have to say is that your next chapter is in high demand. I will be standing in line to get the next one. Loving this story!!

At 9:29am on July 13, 2008, Mary F.C. said…: Poor James. I particularly enjoyed your description of Bill. "...Exxon Valdez spill from Bill's..." I can imagine how greasy his hair was.

At 7:16pm on July 10, 2008, Karen said…: Your dialogue is so engaging. I also loved the line "Two bodies orbited one another..." Such beautifully crafted language.

At 2:28pm on July 10, 2008, Tom Jones said…: Rachel:

"Two bodies orbited one another..." Love it. This story has evolved from a well-crafted beginning to something altogether enthralling--what vivid imagery. You're building toward something very exciting; I can't wait to read the next chapter! Delete Comment

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