Liz, I really admire you for writing about such a personal and difficult topic. As I told you in our writing group, I get chills reading your poem. You've articulated some of my own fears. Thank you for sharing a piece of yourself.
Liz,
Straight up truth-telling done quite poetically. You write about freedom, and what it really demands. For me, there's nothing more to write about or live for.
I am loving this piece because there is a certain amount of vulnerability within it that is extremely powerful. You are honest with the outer world in ways that most people are not able to be honest with themselves and I love this piece for that.
Your piece is really sticking with me--It's brave and honest. You can tell it came from deep within you. You need to keep writing like this. Delete Comment
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Straight up truth-telling done quite poetically. You write about freedom, and what it really demands. For me, there's nothing more to write about or live for.
See you Monday.
Your piece is really sticking with me--It's brave and honest. You can tell it came from deep within you. You need to keep writing like this. Delete Comment